Christmas Invitation

We are learning to communicate with other people around the world using an invitation. I know I have learnt this when I have created an invitation to our christmas concert

Dear Mum and Dad,

I would like to invite you to the school hall for the Christmas concert, it will be held in the 17th of December at 6:30  pm. The Christmas concert is a play of how Jesus was born. There will classes singing and the year eight’s will perform how Jesus. The Year ones to the year sevens will be singing songs when the year eights are acting. The nativity scene is a special time of the year because it's Jesus birthday and Jesus birth, so please come to the concert if you can make it.